The Corona Virus Isn’t Giving Up The Ghost (But It Sure Is Making Life Difficult To Live In)

I haven't written anything in like a month. Every time I think that I might, I get sidetracked by life demanding every little bit of my attention. My wife is pregnant and we're expecting a son come December. Sweetness. However, that means my time is devoted to working for that ever loving green dollar that … Continue reading The Corona Virus Isn’t Giving Up The Ghost (But It Sure Is Making Life Difficult To Live In)

NOVEL INTRO REVISITED: WHICH WORKS BETTER AND WHY?

So I'm rewriting chapter one of my novel, Red Star Sheriff, and I'm curious, which opener do you think works better? The original? Or the rework? I'm trying to be more descriptive but I'm curious if a shorter, more into it sequence is preferable versus the more visually descriptive work. If you have an opinion, … Continue reading NOVEL INTRO REVISITED: WHICH WORKS BETTER AND WHY?